Writing 2 Model Essay

Brainstorm                Why I like my neighborhood.

                                     It is quiet, My neighbors are nice, I feel safe, peaceful moments,

                                     Police drive by,  My kids like it, What things affect my

                                     Neighborhood?

Title                                                            My Neighborhood is Great

Introduction                      I really love my neighborhood. It is a quiet, safe place with great

                                    neighbors. In short, my neighborhood is nice to live in.

1^st Body                            My neighborhood is quiet. Even though it has the regular amount

Paragraph                     of noise of any place, there are many peaceful moments.

                                    For example, after most people have gone to work, you can hardly 

                                    hear any noise. Of course, when the kids get home, there is more

                                    noise; but, it is relatively quiet all day in my neighborhood.

2^nd Body                          Also, I feel safe in my neighborhood. The police drive around it

Paragraph                    everyday and the kids play outside with no problems. Since there

                                    is not much traffic, we don’t worry too much about cars.

                                    Furthermore, I can walk around my neighborhood without being

                                    afraid of someone hurting me. All in all, my neighborhood is

                                    secure.

3^rd Body                           My neighbors are really good people. They watch out for each

Paragraph                    other and this makes where I live extra nice. If anyone has a

                                    problem with their car or even something in their house, a

                                    neighbor is usually there to help. One day, I couldn't start my car, and

                                    my neighbor asked what was wrong. I explained that my car wouldn’t start,

                                    and he got my car going again. This is just one of the many examples of how my neighbors are

                                    the best people I know.

Conclusion                        In conclusion, my neighborhood is a great place to live.

                                    There isn’t a lot of noise, it is secure, and most of all, the neighbors

                                    are helpful. There is no place like home and that is my

                                    neighborhood.